A hope that will give us everything.

A restart for all of creation.

You haven't seen nothing yet.

Just grab on tight
The whole worlds going to take flight.

God is going to put things up to hyper speed.
He is going to take care of earths great need.

There is perfect hope for you and me.
That is the way He wants it to be.

The crowd shouts for change and it will come.
Not a little rearrange, but everything redone.

The human race has of God's earth made a disgrace.
Now it is near to having the evil totally erased.

The heavens will shake.
The earth will quake.

Wobbling as a drunk it will be an awful spectacle
Fear in every ones heart will reach the pinnacle.

These last days will come and the end will be short.
We messed up so bad, there is no better solution to report.

But do not you worry.
It will all change in a hurry.

It is for all creations best.
Everyone who wants in will be blessed.

The stars will be rolled up together.
But His love for you He will not sever.

A new heaven and a new earth that will be coming off
 THE Original Writers tongue a loft.

    The One we all plagiarize.
    The One Satan tries to hide with lies.

The extinct creatures will be resurrected.
In this no wrong will be detected.

All creation 'groans for the revealing of the children of God'
For evil will be crushed by His word, there is no stronger rod.

Evil and death shall be no more.
Everything whole, pure,overflowing, beautiful, awesome and Him we will adore.

This environment more real and sure then ever has been; a greatness from us now hides.
So wonderful, all the poets in the world could not begin to describe.

For those who seek the universe's rebirth.
Welcome to the New Heavens and Earth.

 

Copytright Rhea Crosley 06/02/2008
 

Author's Note

This is more then an edit it is a re-wrtie of another poem I wrote

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is full of hope and love for our world. Your words just fly and flow. You've included facts and emotions, truth personified.

'Evil and death shall be no more.
Everything whole, pure,overflowing, beautiful, awesome and Him we will adore.'

'For those who seek the universe's rebirth.
Welcome to the New Heavens and Earth.'

Those four lines are so beautifully created.

Thank you, thank you for allowing me to share.

[DrumMajorPod]

What a hope-filled treasure! I wish more people could view change as a positive thing like you expressed in your poem. Excellently written.

[Gema]

is is a wake up call for everyone to stop look and listen and change b4 it's too late! well written!

[Angel's Lady]

Great write - very passionate and earnest. Good job.

[pal]

A strong hope for a heaven on earth. Wonderful it will be. A great poem, indeed.

pal

[Mr. Lopez]

I thought that i recognized this poem. But I must say that the message is needed so much now a days.

The human race has of God's earth made a disgrace.
Now it is near to having the evil totally erased.


These words hit me hard. thanks and God bless .

[Jenny Davis]

I absolutely LOVE this!!! It speaks truth because I am a believer...but the way you wrote this is with certainty, strength and faith...I think it would be awesome as a spoken piece, read aloud. I invite you to read this on my radio show, Vent Radio...this friday! Awesome stuff :)

[Timothy]

Very nice.