New Day

New Day

A Poem by RHEA CROSLEY
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A poem that is a song. i made this up while listening to "I love to rise in a summer morning" by Yuzo Koshiro Also, it is good as a spoken song with voice emphasis on joy and invisibility.

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The dawns early star bekins.

 

I hear the call - a smile forms,

passion builds.

 

I love to rise in a summer morning

 

Life is a celebration           and

 

It is a new day,

          YES!

I am alive,

          YES!

Eternity is mine,

          YES

NEWDAY NEWDAY NEWDAY NEWDAY NEWDAY

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© 2008 RHEA CROSLEY


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RHEA CROSLEY
Sometimes you just got to have fun.

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It's such a fun piece. Art is international, right? I can really feel your joy in your words :). Have fun more often~

Posted 16 Years Ago


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yes!!!
I love it!! :):):)

And i love to see you feeling this way.... in the new day!

Beautiful Rhea! Just beautiful! Thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I like the flow and the freshnes here :) cant help smiling at the new day :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Simple and sweet. Intent is everything.

Well done my friend.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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RHEA CROSLEY
RHEA CROSLEY

Annapolis, MD



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