SOMTHING IS

YOU WILL DISCOVER WHAT SOMETHING IS

Somthing offerers the best and most wonderful pleasures,

        but greatly suffers.

Something is true and faithful

        when lies are more inviting.

Something has strong courage

         when hellish fires lick all around.

Something is eternal,

          even when it appears to be dead.

Something hopes

          when there  is no reason to.

Something is so great that its radiance is like the sun.

           Its light travels to the  end of the universe.

  Something is LOVE.   

 

 copyright by Rhea Crosley

Reviews

[Justin Tobey]

:) A beautiful, creative piece about the power of love. The purity of it all brings a smile to my face. At first I didn't understand it, but the end tied it all together, and the overall effect is wonderful. Excellent job.

My one knit-pick critique is a typo, so it doesn't matter much, really: you spelled something without an e in the title and the first line.

Great job and Blessed Be! :D

[Michael X]

rhea-- this writing speaks as a heart psalm and really draws the reader to a state of solice in pondering the
meaning .. there is an aspect of searching in your words-- which delivers the intent of the messege..
what is that something..as in each indivisual.. we must search for such cause in different manners but the
goal is the same..for what has a man if he has no love.. there is value to your words when taken to heart
and insight revealing what it means to .. as in the opening sentence... become the greatest sacrifice..
be the leasdt and one will rise to the top.. your words speak in humility and shows balance..
the balancce between perspectives and its importance upon the soul.. I throroughly enjoyed reading
showing how not everything is as it appears...

[Mr. Lopez]

I loved this poem. It is creative and touching . Good work.

[fgsgdsf]

This was beautiful.
I loved it. It gives a person a good feeling, knowing that there is something out there to look forward to, even when they`re down. Love is beautiful.
Thank you for sharing this.

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I love the theme of this piece. So true that love is that one something that trancends all of everything else. Keeps us going when times are bleak, and comforts us when we feel week.
I love the part about "Something hopes; when there is not reason to" It captures the strongest part of love that we as humanity can attempt to see and feel on a day to day basis.

This a wonderful poem, with many great contrasts that love can and does prevail in the end.
Great Write!

[chris' girlfriend]

i love the last line!!!
the poem flows so perfectly :)

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

Beautiful flowing thoughts on the secret to life.....unconditional love......Well crafted my new friend.

Peace,

Bill :-)

[Rosary]

I like this one its very good