SALAD DAYS

SALAD DAYS

Soar on high

A delightful time

Lullabies heard

A power flows

Dragons in flight

Divine it is

Adventures galore

Young ones enter at will

So enter if you believe

Allen Hollandsworth

�"11/17/11

Author's Note

salad days

SAL-ud-DAYZ

noun plural


Meaning

: time of youthful inexperience or indiscretion; also : an early flourishing period : heyday

Reviews

[Jacques]

This is a good poem don't get me wrong but you're asking me to read and review your poems and most of the time , i feel like when i read one , i've read the others because most of the time there the same [ the fairytale themes and the same words - you use the same words , ones that i see most are - Enchanting , Lullabies and Delight ] i know poems are too express and put your feelings in too words or just for fun but there's a point for me where it's not becoming fun . I don't write poems , i've wrote a book , yes it tends to be repetitive and use the same words but that's because it's a collective and connected to one thing but your poems are writes that stand alone [ not connected or continued in anyway ] but like i've said previously , i've read one , i don't need to read the other , that's my constructive criticism . Excuse me if i'm coming off harsh but i'm giving my opinion and review which you asked me too doo and in all fairness , this is it .

[Jordan]

The poem fits the title perfectly. I could just feel the fairytale of it...

[LadyKarissa]

Very nice poem Allen. Keep writing.

[LadyKarissa]

Nice poem Allen. Lucie

[Stormy Weather]

Very beautiful :)

[EMMIE]

OKAY I DID NOT KNOW THAT WORD. I LEARNED SOMETHING NEW TODAY. YEEY. YOU HAVE GREAT IMAGINATION AND THIS POEM IS A GOOD DESCRIPTION OF THAT. JOB SWELL DONE!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice meaningful and simple short write. I like this. Thank you for the meaning in the author's note as well.

[Tina Kline]

This is full of fun and adventure....it creates a feeling of just be carefree and enjoying the experience.