BOAT

BOAT

A Poem by STAR CHILD

BOAT
Beautiful is the boat
Sailing the stars
So wondrous 
It sails flow
Boat a float in a glass bottle
Oh such a delight
A sight to see
Take a sail
Beauty you can see the grandeur
A song is heard
On the high seas
A can feel it
Boat of glass
Oh so beautiful
A shine you see
Take a ride
Allen Hollandsworth
�"11/3/11

© 2011 STAR CHILD


Author's Note

STAR CHILD
Did for SCHOOL TIME
Miss Alexandra's 3RD GRADE CLASS

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Very nice work there Allen, I like how you took the glass bottle element I suggested and at the end went a step further and depicted a boat made of glass! What a surprise, really enjoyable. I felt as though I were in an art gallery with many different pictures of boats lining the walls, taking a moment to view and appreciate each as I passed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very nice work there Allen, I like how you took the glass bottle element I suggested and at the end went a step further and depicted a boat made of glass! What a surprise, really enjoyable. I felt as though I were in an art gallery with many different pictures of boats lining the walls, taking a moment to view and appreciate each as I passed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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