PRESENTIMENT

PRESENTIMENT

Passion is felt

Reach deep in the soul

Enlightened some are

Soar to new heights

Embarking on your journey

Never ending hope bloom and blossoms

Take the first step onto the path

Into the universal mind

Many are awakening

Embrace it

No one can lose

Take my hand I will lead you to the light

Allen Hollandsworth

�"10/27/11

Author's Note

presentiment

prih-ZENT-uh-munt

noun


Meaning

: a feeling that something will or is about to happen : premonition

Reviews

[Daytonight]

The last line is my favorite. Keep up the good work!

[Shane Blackheart]

Very pretty, and nice imagery. This is a good one :)

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very nice!

[Bloody_Stars]

Nice! its well written. :)

[Margarette]

This is a great piece of writing. The poem is well-written.

[KAREN]

Beautiful write! Love the flow!

[LadyKarissa]

very nice poem Allen. Lucie

[registeredisaster]

sweet with a soft hopeful feel to it. :) well done.

[Larry Dyson]

very nice little one