FORWORD

FORWORD

A Poem by STAR CHILD

FORWORD
From enchanted lands they come
Oh so magical
Riders of the wind
Wondrous they are
Overhead dragons in flight
Riding the dragons
Delighting in this place
Divine is this place
Fairies oh so wonderful
Ride the wind
Oh so grand
Oh so divine
Ride dragons oh so high
Wonders so glorious
Allen Hollandsworth
�"10/27/11

© 2011 STAR CHILD


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this poem didn't really make me want to carry on reading . like i said in my other review - i feel , my personal opinion that your recycling and re-using your whole fantasy elements like the dragons , fairies allsorts and every poem is going to start becoming monotonous , i'm gonna be frank - there already getting alittle repititve for me . i feel like you use the same words in most of your poems like Enchanting and i think you should open your mind and use some other words or write them in a different context . there's some other words which if you write right , you can make them belong into a fantasy .

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like the line : Riders of the wind.
Keep on penning!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem makes me relax and feel calm. Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

me gusta :) este poema es construido muy bonito ! me encanta ! sigue escribiendo !:)
( google translate if you dont understand it:P)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem Allen. Lucie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

don't fall off. good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I so love dragons.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very magical poem, but I feel you're using the same themes a bit too much. It's always good to vary your writing. There are so many different subjects out there in the world of fantasy to experiment with. You are good with fantasy poems, you should try to reach out a bit more and experiment with other things. Other than that, keep on writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice job, I like riding with the dragons into an unknown land!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem didn't really make me want to carry on reading . like i said in my other review - i feel , my personal opinion that your recycling and re-using your whole fantasy elements like the dragons , fairies allsorts and every poem is going to start becoming monotonous , i'm gonna be frank - there already getting alittle repititve for me . i feel like you use the same words in most of your poems like Enchanting and i think you should open your mind and use some other words or write them in a different context . there's some other words which if you write right , you can make them belong into a fantasy .

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write poetry i do many kinds of poetry but mostly i like taking people to magical places i mostly write about dragons and fairies i enjoy writting for children more..

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