FORWARD

FORWARD

Fairies dance

Oh so enchanting

Rings of trees they dance

Wonders to see

Adventure galore

Riders of the wind

Dragons take flight

Delight in this enchanted realm

Reach for your magic

All that believe may enter at will

Raise your eyes to the enchanted skies

Oh how the innocent souls see the wonders

From enchanted lands fairies come

Allen Hollandsworth

"10/25/11 

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Simply enchanting. Keep on penning.

[Sleepless]

nice very nice
my bonito me encanto :)

[registeredisaster]

Beautifully done.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Great imagery! And very enchanting!

[KAREN]

Great imagery!

[Seshat Nidaba]

I can picture it.

[Jasmine Thousand]

It's enchanting!
~Jasmine Thousand~

[LadyKarissa]

Very sweet poem. Allen. Lucie

[Dark Beauty]

I am going to agree with Jacques,but good poem!!

[Jacques]

HELLO . it's a good poem but to me it feels your recycling all the fantasy elements and trying to make them function in new poems - there mostly about Dragons and stuff. i think you should step out of your comfort zone alittle then write what you get from the experience - and it's getting to the point were you're asking me to read and review your poems and i don't need to bcause there mostly all the same try to alter the context but obviously i know that it's you and your poems but you've asked me to read and review so i'm giving you some advice on how to improve . your past poems have been very good but i think you should try to adopt to change to see which other genres you can write poems for or it's going to the same everytime .