COALESCE

COALESCE

A Poem by STAR CHILD

COALESCE
Calmness felt
Oh what beauty
A sleeping child
Lullabies heard
Enchanting you are
Sleeping so peaceful
Climb on a dragon and take flight
Enchanted realms exist
Allen Hollandsworth
�"10/24/11

© 2011 STAR CHILD


Author's Note

STAR CHILD
coalesce

koh-uh-LESS

verb


Meaning

1 : to grow together
2 a : to unite into a whole : fuse *b : to unite for a common end : join forces
3 : to arise from the combination of distinct elements

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i've been really captivated by your previous poems but this in my personal opinion seems to have gone down the hill and isn't as high of expectations as i thought it would be but it's still a good poem with lots of fantasy and light - toned elements which circulate very well throughout .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What a wonderful lullaby for a child. I like the lightness of this one. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one. It seemed like a lullaby or a little kid sleeping and going into a dream. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A fun journey through dream land!! Exciting!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful image this brings to one's mind. A child's dreams can really be magical, this is a very enchanting poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i've been really captivated by your previous poems but this in my personal opinion seems to have gone down the hill and isn't as high of expectations as i thought it would be but it's still a good poem with lots of fantasy and light - toned elements which circulate very well throughout .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your word chices are awesome. The poem itself took me on a ride, an enjoyable one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Great writing and full of fantasy. Another new word for non-native English speakers to remember! I will be sure to use this to my friends.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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STAR CHILD

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