OBEDIENCE

OBEDIENCE

Overhead dragons fly

Be brave

Enchanted lands exist

Delight in the flight

Innocent children enter at will

Enjoying the adventures

Never ending

Calmness is felt

Enter this magical land if you believe

Allen Hollandsworth

�"10/13/11

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Very nice. Keep up the good work.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

What a fun place to be! Great job!

[KAREN]

Felt like I was reading a fairy tale and it took me to another world.

[Thea]

Great poem...Simply written well... :)))

[Shane Blackheart]

This is very cute, I love fantasy and dragons myself. It sounds like it would be a fun world to be in :)

[LadyKarissa]

Nice little poem Allen. Lucie

[J.V. Stanley]

Another cute write my dear with whimsical flair and I reiterate- I do believe watercolor artistry would enhance the feel of your writing. Bravo!

[Sultry Sundance]

I enjoyed this, it was fun and again storylike. If you don't mind my honest direction, please do keep in mind what age group you are writing for so you know they will understand the story, poetry, message... you are writing. Thank you.

[Larry Dyson]

good one little one..