CRYING MOON

CRYING MOON

Crying moon

Crying moon

Why do you cry

There is no reason to be shy

Tell me why

Comfort I will bring

Crying moon do not cry

Rising so high

You bring joy

In your light divine

No end to your delight

Glorious is your light

Mother moon

Oh how special you are

Oh so divine

No end to your delight

Crying moon

Do not cry

You bring delight to all

Songs are sung to you

Allen Hollandsworth

"10/6/11

Author's Note

Did for BEDTIME STORIES
MOON OF THE MONTH

Reviews

[Jacques]

i'm sure i've already reviewed this before - have you edited or re - done it ??? . this was you at your best and i like the rhyming and i think you should consider including and using this into more of your poems and it's a good working formula and it's delighful to read

[Daytonight]

Another well done poem about the moon. Keep on penning.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice work of loss and agony...

[Violeta]

Very nice, sounds a lot like a song :)

[Bloody_Stars]

I love the rhyming and the poem itself. :)

[Thea]

I love looking at the moon...It's so beautiful...Great crafted poem... :)))

[J.V. Stanley]

Unbelievably innocent and sweet, I love your poetry. This poem would lovely if illustrated in a book, in watercolors. Very beautiful write my friend.

[Sleepless]

like it really like it !:)

[Shane Blackheart]

The moon is very pretty, and she does seem lonely, but she brings us light in the dark. Very nice poem.

[KAREN]

Beautiful write!!!