BLOOD MOON

BLOOD MOON

Blood moon oh so red

Lovely you are

Oh such a delight

Overhead your glow is a wonder

Mother moon

Oh how you smile

Over seeing your children

Never ending is your love

Allen Hollandsworth

�"10/6/11

Author's Note

Did for bedtime stories
MOON OF THE MONTH

Reviews

[Jacques]

lovely poem but it didn't do it for me in terms of size of the poem and i think you should maybe add more to it because as nice it was too read there was nothing much that was captivated me to read more but i think it's fine as it is but could use some improving but it's a nice poem and it compliments Crying Moon well .

[Daytonight]

Such a lovely poem. Keep up the great work!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Red the color of Genuine....

[DontBlink158]

I love it, its a great poem!

[J.V. Stanley]

Its a beautiful start I think, if you were to expand upon the red moon aspect of it, perhaps incorporate the Harvest moon within it. I love astronomy, though I'm not quite adept at it but I do find the pictures quite beautiful. As a sort of template for this poem, if you so choose to expand upon it, this link to this picture would be a wonderful addition to it, and perhaps it would provide a bit of inspiration. :)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5083/5304829440_bc965bc18c.jpg

[Shane Blackheart]

The moon is a beautiful thing, especially when it is red and huge up in the night sky. Very nice poem, the moon is my favorite because I feel it is prettier than the sun.

[KAREN]

Such a beautiful glow to this poem when read!

[Raven Starhawk]

Perhaps this is one of my favorites. It has a life to it that carries me away.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Oh sounds so lovely! I bet the children love it!! :)

[LadyKarissa]

This is a great poem Allen. You can find all my poetry over at poetry.com though.
I prefer it and I am doing very well. Lucie