DISREMEMBER

DISREMEMBER

Darkness arising

In the shadows

Shadow riders watch

Reaching for those to near

Embracing the night

Many are taken

Enter only if you dare

Magic of darkness flows

Brave knight on patrol

Ever vigilant

Raising the alarm

Allen Hollandsworth

�"10/4/11

Author's Note

disremember

dis-rih-MEM-ber

verb


Meaning

: forget

Reviews

[Jacques]

this one of my favourites of what i've read from you because i could actually picture this which makes you want too read more but i've actually found the size of the poem relavant and in good form . soo in the smallest of words i will REMBEMBER DISREMEMBER

[Renee]

It will not be easy to forget the beauty in this cleverly executed acrostic. I love it when one cannot instantly detect the form used to create a poem. Me thinks you may have pulled these words and thoughts from another era entirely. EXCELLENT!

[Shane Blackheart]

This is pretty good, I really liked it and the imagery I got from reading it.

[EMMIE]

i can so imagine this while i read it...i love the dark picture that you paint this is a really really really brilliant short piece of darkness ;)

[sarah]

Interesting I like it!