HEART

HEART

Heart and soul

Joy so divine

Beating in unison

United forever

Wishes fulfilled

Dreams so delightful

Heart to heart soul to soul

Embraced forevermore

A love so divine

Racing to a beat

Tender it is

Allen Hollandsworth

�"10/1/11

Author's Note

did for school time
Miss Kokoro ~ Kindergarten

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

Not a bad write, sweet and genuine, has an innocent quality to it as though this 'Heart' had never been broken. It holds hope, not yet tainted with the reality of what love could do to this heart. Not to sound cynical or anything but it kinda makes me dread the dating years with my kids. The harsh reality of love can tear someone apart piece by piece, something I never want them to go through, something I never wanted to go through myself.

This poem reminds me of that innocence, that frailty. Beautiful write my friend. Going into my favorites as a reminder of what it feels like to have never been hurt.

[Raven Starhawk]

There is a kind beat to this that is easy to follow and adore.