MY BLACK DRESS

As go to my closet 
I look through it
And I saw an elegant 
Black dress
So long
And lovely
As I get ready for the school dance















Allen Hollandsworth
"4/16/11

Reviews

[LadyKarissa]

Nice poem but it should read As I go to my closet Allen. You forget a pronoun in this poem. It would read better. I like it very much. I have plenty black dresses and skirts I wear. It is one of my favorite colors. Lucie