BEWARE LEST YOU LOSE THE SUBSTANCE GRASPING AT THE SHADOWS

BEWARE LEST YOU LOSE THE SUBSTANCE GRASPING AT THE SHADOWS

A Poem by STAR CHILD

BEWARE LEST YOU LOSE THE SUBSTANCE GRASPING AT THE SHADOWS
Beware  where you roam
ENTER IF YOU DARE
Wary shadows
Riders of darkness
Enter at your peril
Long ago darkness
Embracing all who come near
Shadows so dark
Taking the innocent souls
Young ones bravely enter
Oh the dark fears
Under the queen of darkness
Loss of innocence
Oh how darkness swallows
Under the cover
Lulling innocent souls into a false sense of security
Oh feel the power hear the cries
Soul of darkness grabbing innocent souls
Embracing there souls
Taking them deep in the darkness
Having the innocence to their queen
ENTER IF YOU DARE
So beware
Under the allure of darkness
Bewitching the innocent
Shadow riders in black  riding the darkness
Taking all that near  to nightmarish places
A power so dark
Never ending  cries no escape
Can you feel the power
ENTER THIS PLACE IF YOU DARE
Grabbing the innocent
Riders of darkness
A powerful force
Soul takers
Pulling those who dare
Into the nightmare
No escape
Glowing red eyes and fire 
All that enter
Taken to the dark queen
Shadow riders there steeds of fire
Having dark missions
Alluring they are
Dragons of darkness are their steeds
Overwhelming darkness
Wanders of innocence lost
Allen Hollandsworth
©7/13/09

© 2011 STAR CHILD


Author's Note

STAR CHILD
This one gave me nightmares for 3 nights

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You need not be in fear of darkness, not if you have faith in God because if you do, you are protected from evil always. I don't know what the fascination with darkness is about, but personally I would rather walk in the light, it is much more pleasant and safer.
You have crafted this well in the writing though...

Blessssssssssssss

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice i love the dark arts in this poem that you created here write more

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really enjoyed - one of my favourites which you've wrote - it is Nightmarish

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write poetry i do many kinds of poetry but mostly i like taking people to magical places i mostly write about dragons and fairies i enjoy writting for children more..

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