THE CRYING MOON

CRYING MOON

Crying moon why do you cry

Rise and shine

You are so young

In you happiness shines

No don’t cry

Gladness you bring

Mother moon tending to her crying child

Oh so beautiful

Oh such glory you bring

Never ending joy

Allen Hollandsworth

"9/18/11

Author's Note

Did for BEDTIME STORIES
MOON OF THE MONTH
FOR AUGUST

Reviews

[Jacques]

i like this one but i like both this and RODOMENONTADE for different reasons . i like this because it feels serene and calm and it's not one which rhymes with i tend to like but i like the other one because it to me feels darkly and edgy . they're both a nice read .

[LadyKarissa]

Nice poem Allen. Keep up the good work. Lucie

[Bloody_Stars]

Short and sweet :) Good write.

[Raven Starhawk]

At times I feel like the moon; so high up in the sky, cold and alone. And tears do fall readily sometimes. You penned this beautifully.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very sweet poem.

[Mirrl]

Very nice! It has a nice feel and it a steady beat. Very well written, I'm glad I found this poem.