GALAXY

GALAXY

A Poem by STAR CHILD

GALAXY
Galaxies come in many shapes and sizes
So full of stars
In many colors
Blues come out so true
Reds so bloody
Some have arms
Some do not
The sight is so wondrous
Look up at the twinkling lights
See its beauty
Allen Hollandsworth
�"9/15/11

© 2011 STAR CHILD


Author's Note

STAR CHILD
Did for school time
WORD FOR THE DAY FOR ALL GRADES
FIRST GRADE WORD

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what fascinates me about this poem . you never once fail to live up to the story of it and there is mystery and art that is intriguing and like i said before i see that your progressing and stretching your imagination by far to great lenghts and it would be my loss if i didn't read this . WELL DONE

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what fascinates me about this poem . you never once fail to live up to the story of it and there is mystery and art that is intriguing and like i said before i see that your progressing and stretching your imagination by far to great lenghts and it would be my loss if i didn't read this . WELL DONE

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have always adored the view of the vast immeasurable heavens above our little blue and green planet home tucked away so remotely in quite a considerably unknown corner of the great universe. The final three words of this poem struck a strong note with me - "See its beauty". It's truly upsetting that bright lights of industrial progress continues to flush out such a view more and more. Perhaps if they'd just stop, in an unlit area on a moonless, cloudless night, and just, for once, look UP... Maybe they'd realize what they're missing.

Great little poem. I enjoyed it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Galaxies are just so full of intrigue, and you have written words that capture both the beauty and mystery!
Nice use of your word for the day!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is excellent Allen. Lucie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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