LOVE

LOVE

Oh what a feeling

It comes on

Love is passionate

It draws you in

If it is real it is amazing

If not the doom lurks

Allen Hollandsworth

�"7/20/11

Author's Note

Did for school time 5th grade word of the day

Reviews

[midnight star]

Love always draws you in, and thers nothing you can do about it. the heart wants what the heart wants. Lovely piece by the way!

[LadyKarissa]

What a very nice poem Allen. I look at Love as in I Corinthians 13. Lucie

[JanieB]

Fun.

[Helen Crutchett]

Star Child, I like your description of love. Very nice, although It can't be considered for the contest because you did not include the 10 words stated in the rules. Thanks for posting anyway. Kindest regards, Helena

[Fire Tulip]

Haha..I remember 5th grade love...lovelyXD

[alexlessah]

Very true about love, I love it!

[Tasha]

Love does do that, great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra