THE BIRD THAT FLIES BACKWARDS

THE BIRD THAT FLIES BACKWARDS

　

Their once was a bird

Holding a secret

Enjoy this sight

Bird that flies backward

In the azure sky

Rising with grace

Do you see its wonder

That flies backward

Hope it brings

Amazing is the sight

Take a look

Flies backward

Lovely is the bird

In the sky flies backward

Enlightening the ones that watch

Soaring ever so graceful

　

Backward flight

A delight to watch

Climbing into the heavens

Keeping to the backside

Wondrous it is

A laugh it brings

Riding the wind

Delighting in flight

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Allen Hollandsworth

�" 6/28/11

Reviews

[Margarette]

A message of time it seems! Though you should have written "There" instead of "Their" in the first line. Overall, you denounced the great features of a bird that flies backwards. Good writing!

[Stormy Weather]

I like this because it could really mean many different things. I like things like that. And your wording is great, it all flows really well! Great poem. :)

[BrynnaW.]

Your best poem so far!! I thought that it was absolutely brilliant! I loved it!! Keep on writing!