PAINTED NAILS

PAINTED NAILS

　

As we gather together

For a fun time

With the finger nail polish

The variety of pinks

And reds

Greens

Purples

And blues

I examine them all

And chose lavender

But when mom sees she hits the roof

You are too young

For makeup and finger nail polish she says

　

　

　

　

　

　

Allen Hollandsworth

" 6/25/11

Author's Note

Girl poem

Reviews

[Margarette]

The first time I have had my first nail polish was when I was 13. I picked the colorless one and I immediately rub it off the next day for fear of having offenses at school. Maybe you can have your nails colored when you have your prom or when you become a teen. Happy writing!

[Roxi L]

This reminds me of my nails. I have neon green nails and black tips...they look awesome. The poem really captures the esence that is girlhood.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Stormy Weather]

:) Captures the essence of girlhood, in a sense. I like it.

[BrynnaW.]

Goes along with PAINTED FACE.... Once again, I hate how my mom wants me to wear nail polish Hahaha... I am a weird girl apparently. Anyways, This puts colorful nails in my mind and I think it's a nice poem. Good job and keep writing!