FREEDOM

　

What is freedom

Well that is a good question

Freedom is different

For different people

To some it is doing what ever they want

To me it is simply living the way I want

We are free in this country to say what we want

With out fear of reprisals

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Allen Hollandsworth

�" 6/19/11

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

A very creative and positive poem.

[Margarette]

Good poem or should I say it's better as a principle indeed. I like the way you incorporate pure innocence of a child in this one. Best way to enjoy freedom is really living the way you wanted it.

[Sher{alynn} Veron{ica}]

I love the innocence of optimism in this piece. Job well done :)

[BrynnaW.]

Sorry. Made a mistake on my other one. You talk about freedom but sometimes we don't have it. But I like how it's peace that you speak of. Good job!

[BrynnaW.]

I like it... Sometimes we don't have freedom as I noticed. Still I liked it! Keep on writing!!! Love it!