ABANDON

ABANDON

A Chapter by STAR CHILD

ABANDON
Abandon this illusion
Be in the reality
A seeker of enlightenment
No doubts to hold
Delight in the truth
Oh those that can not see what is true
None should deny
Abandon the troubles
Step through
The door
Abandon the materialism of this world
You can not take things
Of this world with you
Allen Hollandsworth
�"3/3/13 


© 2013 STAR CHILD


Author's Note

STAR CHILD
#6

abandonuh-BAN-dun




noun

:
a thorough yielding to natural impulses; especially : enthusiasm, exuberance

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Not bad. Some of your word choice seems a little much for the piece but that really doesn't matter too much - it still works. Good concept and execution. Well done.

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