Rise and Become

In the end you will fall and I will prevail, you torn open wounds and destroyed everyone around me. But not me. You almost had me, but i was to strong for you to tear down. Your a coward and will never measure to anything I will become. I will but back together the people you have torn down. They will restore, while you stare.

Reviews

[Ron Hogan]

This is really prose, more than poetry. It could be prose poetry if you worked at it a bit (and look up "prose poetry" for an explanation and examples). If you fixed the gross grammatical errors this could have a potentially strong message, but you might want to work at adding to it, to engross the reader. Up to you.