A Letter

A Letter

 

To treasure a letter of your leaving.

Leaves me wanting more.

A loss so swift.

Silence, is all that's left.

Reviews

[Lalalalalalalala57]

Short, sweet and to the point :-)

I think it's the shorter poems, just like this one, that carry the most impact. It's like: "Why say more when you can say it all in just a few lines?"

I think the words you chose were quite intriguing: "treasure", "swift", "silence". Very descriptive when placed into that sort of context. They alone, quite possibly, could have consisted of another completely separate poem.

All in all, I liked it :-) Very good job, friend. I hope I can get around to reading some more of your work!