Living Now For The Latter

Living Now For The Latter

A Poem by S.S.P.
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an appreciation of art, artists and people who try. written 6/27/09. it's hot.

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I wish to leave a streak upon this ground

in the aeon sure to follow

an age that may become plus or minus

forms of present design and arrangement

thus possibly negating this particular occupation

but a streak none the less, a form

an expression of this experience

 

too many lay their frames inside

only replicas as remnants to repeat the act

with limited variance and vigor

stones a fitting remembrance

of beings hard to life, stoic and stiff

this one, soon enough to slouch and stone

hopes, in death, to have two homes

one in.  one upon.

 

© 2009 S.S.P.


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You are right- far too many try to replicate what was already said. I applaud the courage of the one who says, "I want to leave something that is mine, d****t!"

For in the end, I would think our greatest fear is not what happens when we die, but what happens after it, when the impact of our lives is measured?

Very moving piece, nicely executed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I realllyy suck at this review s**t, buttt, bunny thumperr likes this s**t (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


I found my way here again. It happens sometimes. I found the work even more lovely the second time around. Reminds me a little of Frost. First rate work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is great stuff . . .

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Thats really really....GREAT! I love how you put everything. Especially about repeating the acts, which everyone does on occation. Very good poem, hope to read more this good! =)

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Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can only describe this as powerful. Wonderful write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You are right- far too many try to replicate what was already said. I applaud the courage of the one who says, "I want to leave something that is mine, d****t!"

For in the end, I would think our greatest fear is not what happens when we die, but what happens after it, when the impact of our lives is measured?

Very moving piece, nicely executed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written. I loved it. It was unique. Very cool

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Damn pretty f*****g good. better then anything else i've seen on here yet.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written. I love the first stanza, sounds conversational.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Rock on...That was mighty cool my friend. You should enter these in every contest available. I'd vote for you

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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36 y/o going on 90, here now, gotta do something to keep the next half interesting. Aside from the poems I am also a failed musician, artist and capitalist. Feel free to write if you like, i'm only .. more..

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