Rainy Day at Sonic

Rainy Day at Sonic

A Poem by Smokey
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This describes what it's like at a Sonic Drive-In on a rainy day

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Put on a visor
Clip on my name
Tie up my apron
Time to play the waiting game

Look out the window
Watch the rain flow 
Lightening strikes 
Thunder sounds

We all get excited
Waiting for more

Sunshine means rush hours
Rain means play
This is how we spend our days

© 2012 Smokey


Author's Note

Smokey
I am really bad at rhyming words o.o I try to make things flow but I can't always find the right words.

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This is a really interesting poem, and I can picture the lack of activity during stormy days. Well done, and kudos to you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Flows pretty well, Especially the second stanxa,
I really enjoyed this write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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