Inspired By 3DaysGrace

I hate everything about you.

Why do I love you?

Why do I waste my time?

When I get nothing in return.

I seek acceptance.

I seek the love others receive.

When did i hit the bottom,

The bottom of your list?

Your heart is small.

It's cold.

It's unforgiving.

You mind is closed.

It's unaccepting.

It's clouded.

Remember the memories.

Remember the times together.

See what you are losing.

See what is fading,

Fading into the Shadowlands.

To be forever lost.

Reviews

[brigid]

this is a beautiful and honest poem. i love the opening lines... i hate everything about you.why do i love you...a very powerful opening...
your heart is small,it's cold....i can feel the shudder of the coldness..
you write clearly and succinctley. it is brutal..but then love and hate sometimes are.
keep writing please...

[Sweet Emotions]

This reminds me of what I've been feeling recently too.