Saying Goodbye

Saying Goodbye

A Poem by Smokey

I have friends and family that I can go to.

Just to listen to me cry and rant for awhile.

I don't need you anymore

You look at me and turn your nose up

I hope you know what you are doing

To me

To them

To yourself

My final goodbyes will be quick yet painful

I won't be okay for awhile

But I have to try

I must make myself better again

The only way i see that possible right now is

Getting you out of my life

I was doing so good before you became involved again

After 5 months

Now its been almost a year since the day you said goodbye then

I'm so done with you

© 2012 Smokey


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Hmmm... I'm not really getting whats going on here.
You have the emotion there but I don't see whats happening, or maybe that's just me not liking invisable plots :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this because it feels exactly like what I'm going through.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Smokey
Smokey

O'Fallon, MO



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