Breathing

One breath

That’s all I need

To end the one thing inside me

The raging

So tired of sinking

I decided to drown

Maybe then this hollowness will be brimming

Burning

I let it consume me

Slowly

Surly

I won’t be living

surly

I'll be walking

But not breathing

~S.S.A.F.

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Living dead. Or like dyin on the inside... Which is nasty. Nice work, i like the structure too. :)

[~S.S.A.F.]

Thanks, I'm glade you liked it

[closed]

i like the emotive essence behind this

i think it's really good

[~S.S.A.F.]

Thank you very much ^-^

[Logan Adler]

This is really good. I say that because I can compare to that so much! Especially the second half of it. You should do more.

[~S.S.A.F.]

Thank you ^-^