Unstoppable

 *Please read the first line twice with and without the (brackets) both times*

(s)he was (in)complete

we knew (nothing but heard) of everything secretly

To us it was (im)possible

A love of complete perfection

This was everything because we knew of not(hing)

One thing being on earth (un)reasonable

To them we are children

We secretly (are) care(less)

 But to us we are unstoppable

~S.S.A.F.

Reviews

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im always looking for new ideas and concepts to be impressed by
this does just that, as it seems to be something i havent seen done before...

nothing short of inventive


-Dream

[~S.S.A.F.]

Thanks, i really like working with ( ) because it forces people to read it twice and find the story in the story. its really fun ^-^