Monster Hero

There is no monster scatter then the ones we create

The ones stuck inside our minds

The ones that know every secret or hiding place

The ones that are made from the battles you fight every day

That is the monster we all fear

We fear it cause we know we'll never win

At least not alone

Too scared to ask for what we need

Yet too weak to fight the beast 

Waiting in the shadows for someone who'll know

The one we'll call our hero

~S.S.A.F.

Reviews

[Logan Adler]

First word, it's "There" not "Their" I'm sure you knew that but mistakes happen. The one thing that did bother was on the 6th line. "cus" at least turn it into "cause" or better yet "because" anyway, that's just me, and I don't have all the answers.

[~S.S.A.F.]

Actually I'm dyslexic, so spelling, reading and writing are really hard for me because everything gets mixed up or jumbled so the fact that you took the time to correct my mistakes are very appreciated. Thank you so much. ^-^