She Felt

She felt invisible

Like no matter what

She was predictable

A hassle

As other girls dreamed for a castle with their perfect fairy tale endings

She dreamed of nothing more than to be observed

She wanted to be seen by the keen and know that she was forever pronounced

She didn’t want to be any buddy’s one ride

But for her first time

She wanted to be their one and only spouse

She was tired of being see through

She wanted this dream to come true

Because then she can say she wasn’t this escort of the nightly sort

But instead announce that she was his only comfort

To never be hurt and live life sure

That forever they are lovers

~S.S.A.F.

Reviews

[Brittany]

Very relatable. Well Written. I liked it.

[~S.S.A.F.]

I'm Glade you enjoyed it. ^-^
If you have any ideas of how i can improve i would love to hear it.

[Brittany]

I think it would have been even better if it sounded a little more flowy. if that makes sense

[~S.S.A.F.]

a smother flow
makes sense
Thank you very much ^-^