Raging Clouds

Raging Clouds

A Poem by SRS_Writer

            Raging Clouds

 

As the clouds hover over the mountains

It lets out his cry.

Rain trickles down

As the sun tries to let out her beautiful smile

Trying to make the rain content

By letting her rays beam on the horizon.

Drying up the wet sadness

The clouds are displaying.

But the clouds are not amused by her charades.

Instead, the clouds send the glorious sun

With such a extraordinary glow

Back behind the clouds 

Like a raging tornado

Causing there to be no warmth, no glow.

 

By: Shaudae Smith 

© 2010 SRS_Writer


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Raging Clouds...Great title ...Beautifully haunting.
Love the images like the sun's beautiful smile,
drying up the wet sadness, raging tornado..
Thanks for sharing SRS
LLR

Posted 14 Years Ago



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