If I kissed You in the Rain

"If I Kissed You in the Rain" is a poem I made up about choices of rejection or confirmation.

If I kissed you in the rain, would you kiss me back, run away, or smack me in the face. I wondered if you would confirm me or reject me. Was there really an option?, or was I ever going to kiss you. It would go like this. I kiss you, you kiss me. your hand full of water would meet my waist and grip me tightly. Your forehead would meet mine and slip by. My hands would meet your neck and my bangs would drip of water. After a few seconds we would pull away. Looking at each other of smiles and excitement. But why? Why would we be excited? It was a 10 second kiss. I would take my right hand and run it through my dark long hair. You would smile a great smile. We would walk off holding hands as if we just got engaged. But its just a "if" question. Doesn't mean it would happen. It's just if i kissed you in the rain.
*sigh*

Author's Note

ignore spelling and punctuation

Reviews

[Sucker Punch]

Emotional...I luv it

[Justin Stull]

i love how you use the if situation but at the same time your imagery it made me wish i was this lucky guy maybe one day that will be me somewhere untill then i walk the lonely path of a empty soul that needs fixing but is in the path to get better no matter what i love the fact that you excepted me as a friend and i love you writing

much love

your friend ;) Justin