One Slow Summer Noon

Based on a Bengali poetry of Akshya Kumar Baral

Me and my dull shady tree,

World slowly burning around me,

Drooping lids in dreaming spree,

Shutting my mind in whimsical glee,

Shimmering Summer spreading over saturated She,

My dull shady tree intoxicate meandering me.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

A pretty write :))

[David Lewis Paget]

Highly unusual but interesting piece.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

imagery, alliteration, this is good

[Allie]

This is perfect! This makes me want to go lay against a tree and take a nap. Great imagery .

[Manpreet]

Vow ! Nice word use and great write!

[reflectingus]

I love how this poem has this overall dreamy, cozy effect with just a perfect picture of a nice summer afternoon. Though, in the first line, "My dull shady tree and I" would be correct grammar, it doesn't matter here, because it contributes to the brilliant rhyming, so yeah, this piece is flawless.

[Deandra Dawn]

Very nice. Awesome job.

[Sethnicity]

Best one I've read yet! Good job! keep it up.