Peace

It's so nice to be peaceful

peaceful surroundings

peaceful music

Calmness!

Why is it so hard sometimes to find peace?

Without peace

we wouldn't be able to appreciate

the small things in life.

Sometimes peace is all it takes.

to feel light, and free

to feel happy.

Like nature,

in the woods

in the forest, things are peaceful

things are calm

sometimes that's all we need

to get lost in the woods,

to find peace.

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I love it when I am in the woods, it is indeed very peaceful. Sometimes it is hard to find peace because we are so focused on our circumstances, but that is why we need to let go and let God take control of it all so we don't worry to death lol (still trying to do that myself). The forest is probably my favorite spot to be in, I just love seeing the plants and trees and also the animals.

Good Job

[Modernday-Rapunzel]

I love this! I know exactly what you mean!
When I'm in nature I feel engulfed be peace.
Theres just something about the fresh air that clears my mind.

[Aprille]

I like it. It's simple and sincere. :)

[lorennn]

I like this one! It has a warm feeling to me.
(:

[Sunny]

Haha thanks!

[Jordan]

Nice write :) I particularly enjoyed the ending stanza, and the message incorporated into it.

Also I'm a sucker for nature poems.

[Sunny]

Thanks Jordan :-)

[Jordan]

Of course!

[Matching Socks]

Yup, sometimes you just need you find that special place... where you can rest, ponder life, rejuvenate.

[yuki]

I agree peace is wonderful in the best moments nicely done :)

[Kieta!]

I have science reading, a science test, and a history/literature project, all due tomorrow... it's 4:30pm here and I have youth group from 6:30 - 8:30...

I would've thought it impossible to find peace at the moment, but then I saw your poem. Even as I read it everything else momentarily sorta fell away... :D Thank you and great job!! :) :) :)

[Sunny]

Well i'm glad this helped, even for just a moment! And thank you for the review! :)