But Whatever

But Whatever

A Story by Sunny
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so yeah. reviews please?

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A party is what we could make it,
it's what it could be.
We could be working but
who said it can't be fun?
We may be repainting my bedroom
but whatever.

Black and white, that could be the theme!
Same as my room!
blare the radio real loud, and have fun!
but whatever.

It would be fun!
We could do it you know!
Make a party out of work, it could be fun.
But you know whatever.

© 2014 Sunny


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Awesome poem sunny. Enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ashidash!
nicely done enjoyed this :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thanks yuki!
Great job on using punctuation to complement the subject matter! Those exclamation points really uplift the tone. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jordan! You really do give some very nice reviews! :)
Hope to see some new work soon.
Jordan

10 Years Ago

Of course!
Lol! Make it fun Sunny! :)
Love your attitude sweet pea.
You're like a breath of sunshine.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ana! You're so very kind! :)

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