Someone

Someone

A Story by Sunny
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Dedicated to my Heavenly Father! And Inspired by several different works. :) Please enjoy

"
Someone
Whom I cannot see is up there
looking down at me.
watching what i do,
helping me get through
this thing called life Taking my ideas and
directing my steps in the right direction,

Someone 
who is always gonna be here for me 
someone who gives me no reason to worry
But someone who gives me peace
when I'm in tears, 
when I'm desperate
for comfort.

This is someone
who I can count on
who will never lie for any reason
but who will be there to help me 
and correct me when it's needed

This is MY someone!

© 2014 Sunny


Author's Note

Sunny
Again my thoughts! :)

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Great poem, beautiful! - B.D.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I absolutely love this! You did a great job, keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thanks girl!!
So true and beautifully written! I love how your poem communicates that He will always be there for us! Fantastic job!! :)

P.S. 2 Peter 3:18 :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review and the scripture reference! I will definitely look it up! :)
your thoughts do spread nicely done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thank you Yuki!
Beautifully penned Sunny!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ana!:)
^^ yeah I feel the same way, it is nice to have Him as our someone to help us through because He will never leave us or forsake us. I noticed that you put "upper there" when it should only be "up there" but other than that it was good ^^

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Lol thank you! And don't think I would've seen that mistake thank you:)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

lol You're welcome ^^
Amen! I enjoyed your pray in your poetry...well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sunny

10 Years Ago

Thank you Amos. :)

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