Forever and Ever and Never at all

Forever and Ever and Never at all

A Poem by Sunny

Forever and ever is a long time wait
But if you're patient enough you pass the waiting
But only wait
And to wait some more

But never at all is a long time for nothing
Never is not nothing
Its not just nothing
But the absence of something

© 2015 Sunny


Author's Note

Sunny
Yes I know it really makes no sense. Buuut its what I wanted

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"Never is not nothing
Its not just nothing
But the absence of something"
Oh, you play with words very well. I found myself speechless because of the ending. I agree with Chelsey. This was deep. There was something more that you can squeeze in it. Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is actually pretty deep, either that or I'm thinking too hard about it. Good job. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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