An ode to a dejected friend!

An ode to a dejected friend!

A Poem by Samhitha Mopati
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An inspiring poem to a friend who is disinterested in life because she encounters failure!

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Dear melancholic friend,


When you lose in life, do not lose the 'winning' flavour,


As the waves lost are not lost forever,


They do come back with their original fervour,

 

Afterall, it's the fall from a great height,

that renders water full of delight,

So, pick up your spirits and pace,

Strike back right in the face!

 

Don't care about what others might say,

It's ultimately "YOUR" game, not their's to play,

Fathom the meaning of your inner soul,

Enhance your capabilities, justify your role,

 

Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality,

Onto the dias of a competition called life,

For this is the reason for people's strife!

 

Let me take leave of this note with a note itself:

When in the game, fasten up your lace,

And show the world your worth,

let them admire your grace!

© 2015 Samhitha Mopati


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I really liked this poem :) the rhyming makes it flow nicely and the pauses are natural and not forced. Awesome job :)

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Samhitha Mopati

9 Years Ago

Glad you liked it..:)









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This is a great piece and I love the images you create here to encourage a friend who has given up. We can all take this advice. I enjoyed this.

FT

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Samhitha Mopati

9 Years Ago

FT Ledrew :- Thanks a ton for the review ! :)






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9 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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Added on February 20, 2015
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Samhitha Mopati
Samhitha Mopati

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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A girl with a generous and dwindling soul, attempting to speak my heart out to the world. I'm enamoured by people and their behavior and often dedicate my poems and articles to them. I'm seventeen ye.. more..

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