Pain is what you seek
A Poem by
Salem
© 2014 Salem
Reviews
Nice flow of thoughts in the short poem. Love cannot be controlled. Just caressed with kindness and hope the love grow. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
This is a well-written poem, thank you for sharing.
Insight.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is a well-written poem, thank you for sharing.
Insight.
Love can hurt, but I think it true, the wise saying suggesting that it is better to have loved, and lost, than to never have loved at all.
Great writing! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Love can hurt, but I think it true, the wise saying suggesting that it is better to have loved, and lost, than to never have loved at all.
Great writing! :)
9 Years Ago
thanks for your read
you sure do sound like a super love expert!
Posted 9 Years Ago
you sure do sound like a super love expert!
9 Years Ago
thanks for your review
beautiful one ...."lie between one another"..loved the line
Posted 10 Years Ago
beautiful one ...."lie between one another"..loved the line
10 Years Ago
thank you for your kind words
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Added on October 15, 2014
Last Updated on October 15, 2014
Author
Salem Riyadh, Riyadh , Saudi Arabia
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