Lets Bomb a hospital !!

A man wake up every morning to do his job
a job among the other jobs considered to be on top
a Doctor he is and been blessed by god
he saves the lives of many people even cops 

Another man wake up with a gloomy face 
his job is to follow the devil's trace
following the steps of Satan, what a disgrace !!
to go against your own human race !

the doctor works so hard to save a life
and the terrorist working to take them 
with a grenade, guns or even knives
they murder somebody husband or wife

for a second I want these people to be logical
what have they suffered ? what have they seen?
do they just wake up in the morning and say 
"lets go bomb a hospital and erase the human being !!"

wont they realize they are being monsters 
killing patients, nurses and doctors 
killing mothers, fathers, sons and daughters
what is so great about being mobsters ??!

in a war God had forbid to kill a soldier who lost the will to fight 
God had showed to us what is right and what is wrong?
God had sent prophets to guide us from darkness to light
but you are killing , plundering and singing the death song 

you are following the devil 
and the devil now have nothing to do
as his job has been fulfilled by you.
and in crimes you have reached his level!

those innocent souls which have been lost wont go in vain
God will justify them and heaven will be their gain 
but you who lost your sanity will be thrown in hell 
with all the sins of the people you have slain 

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

This is an important issue and it is important to write about such things. It is not entirely black and white where the fault lies but of course there is no justification in killing innocents.
Well done.
You might like to read my story 'A tale of two cafes' which addresses the motivation behind a suicide bomber.
Thanks,Alan

[MadalaJose]

The title got my attention. I read it and honestly i could not call it a very rich poem in terms of poetic devices, you can work on more showing than telling. Nonetheless, you have made your point, the theme is very clear. And what I like about your poem is that it appeals to human real problems, problems that a lot of poets ignore. I believe that in as much as we can write and appreciate poetry for its own sake, addressing real issues that affect real people is one of the duties of a writer of any genre of literature. You did good friend.

[Salem]

thank you for the honest review...

[Iris]

Same here. A few grammatical mistakes but there is raw despair and passion in your writing. I agree completely with everything you have said. This is undeniably against human nature, let alone God's commands!

[Salem]

thanks !!......

[Yasmin]

So the title was the first thing to have my attention and it was worth reading. you have few grammatical mistakes which I hope you fix because the idea behind this write is genius. the poem shows your anger and frustration and the deep plead for the end of terrorism...
My favourite lines are :
"Another man wake(s) up with a gloomy face 
his job is to follow the devil's trace
following the steps of Satan, what a disgrace !!
to go against your own human race !"

[Salem]

thank you for your read and comment

[Yasmin]

You are welcomed
Please honour me with a visit to my profile

[Salem]

sure :) ..........