A Smile Will Set You Free

we all here to hold you high 
to give you a shoulder when you cry
to give you a hand and let you see- 
a smile from you could set you free
so smile my dear and let us know 
we have a star will always glow 
a beautiful angel that you are
a beautiful and gorgeous little star 
like a flower you always bloom
with a scent of the best perfume 
to see your smile is all I care
because it is just fair
your smile I might not see
but to feel your happiness is the key
so hold my hand to get past your fear
and nothing ahead is worth your tear

Reviews

[Stars and Whales]

This is beautiful! Inspirational, happy...this poem is really good! You put a smile on my face when I read it! Thanks for sharing, there is a realistic beauty to your writing, and it is truly awe-inspiring. Thanks for sharing, Salem! I hope you keep writing to the best of you ability and never quit!

[Terpsichore]

A smile is worth more than words. Nicely written.

T

[Salem]

thank you for your kind words

[Eve Ola]

but to feel your happiness is the key. punching line. well done Salem

[Salem]

thank you , glad you liked it

[Edward Lancheister]

good penned with well written rhyme. thanks for share

[Salem]

thank you sir