Broken

This was a joke, my friends' girlfriend broke up with him, so I wrote this to cheer him up some.

Luscious strawberry red lips, sweet as sugar, and as addictive as cocaine.

Soft supple skin, tanned from hours under the sun.

Silky smooth hair, reaching down, hugging her neck.

Beautiful dark brown eyes, that could see into a man’s soul. 

Day’s together in twilight, in each other’s arms.

Everything perfect, holding my heart in her hand.

Like a vice grip she crushed it, destroying everything we had.

The b***h broke my heart.

I need a hug.

Author's Note

Be as critical as you want, just remember that this isn't serious

Reviews

[A.Lee]

I agree with the previous review. I was following the emotion and then the end was like "What? lol okay..." :) I like it though.

[Fairy Tales]

ok, you confused me...my heart was feeling sorry for you about ready to cry, then you land the lol it isn't serious part. the comment you have at the end made me really take off laughing!