ROIZEDON...

A thought at sunset...

The sun-lit void spread out like a veil

Hides in its background a secret assail

Darkness shall pour out ; "The end!" all shall wail...

                        -Sindednis                        

Reviews

Ain't the sunsets beautiful at where you live? to catch some good lion-eye... this is such a serene excellent short poem. I was in it! good sign! :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Dark and thought-ful ..

Jazz x

[An owl on the moon]

The fierce roar shall overwhelm... profound apocalypse... the lifting of the veil... and here in these three lines we catch a glimpse of that all-consuming fire... Truly powerful.

[Linear]

I know little of Haiku, but I like this, will we all Wail when that final sound assails our ears? I think not

Deeper than deep thoughts :O)

[Chris]

Haiku and senyru are formal syllable-driven pieces.
The syllable counts are 5 - 7 - 5.

Your work has good imagery and leaves a fine aftertaste within the mind.