LOOKING FOR ANGELS

We want reason for life, why?

Our faces down,
Anxiety- a crown,
A glistening on our scalps

Pursuing purpose,
We count no loss
In employing misleading maps

Sanity's sought in morphine,
Our wants define our doctrine
Trying to fill up our empty gaps

Illumination's shroud
Makes us so proud
As we search for life's reason

Our souls burn in us
Our tongues- wild grass
Locking us in entangled prison

Illusion's our shrine,
Stuck in cloud nine,
We are looking for angels...

        -Sindednis

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description and powerful statements made the reader think and raised new questions. We need help on the road of living. We do need Angels and kind people to give us direction. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MOON]

Looking in all the wrong places for a reason . Sometimes life needs to just unfold.

[Jane Doe]

i like this very much I am dearly sorry that i am so slow on reviewing back and I thank you for the two poems you have gave your insight on :)
Thanks snide

~a
100.100

[lei]

very expressive piece..

[Dev]

"Illumination's shroud Makes us so proud As we search for life's reason" Man, I love this line the most! Your write is something very quote worthy and I love how it has a very personable feel to it!

[.]

your descriptive verse is powerful in this poem..there is no reason for life except the joy of the experience..but we are inquisitive beings constantly searching for greater understanding..when somethings are always going to be out of our reach..thought provoking.

[Brook Hughes]

wow... great poetic expression:) very descriptive. i love the lines... illuminations shroud makes us so proud.. as we search for lifes reason:) We are all searching for the reason of life... although we dont realize it. I havent found it yet. but im going to enjoy my life... even if there is no reason:) enjoy the youth. lol. thats what everyone tells us to do. keep up the good work:)

[An owl on the moon]

The force of reason driving our minds and hearts to search out something deeper... greater than simple existence... And you play with this concept, rolling it over, glancing back and forth across its face... and we are left to ponder this profound place..

So heartfelt, and thank you, this poem is great! Totally on level, and pure. I loved reading your words. They have a natural way of telling... I'm amused. There is no need to "quote" anything of you, Each sense, has it's own beauty...

[Nastia]

niiiiiice, ure really really good, thumbs up

[Linear]

We are not yet that which we may become.
We must reach far beyond our narrow confines
And we may feel the winds of angels wings caress our face, only then will we truely sing.


Deep poetic expression here, much enjoyed :O)