UNTITLED

What is it that you would you do
If past midnight,
You woke up; maybe at two,
Full of fright
'cause of a nightmare past
Of a ship with ruined mast?...

If the ship was likened to life
On it's maiden voyage in seas
Troubled and full of strife,
And winds like a dragon's hiss
Wiped out every single element of creation
Then existence was but GOD's imagination...

...what would you do?

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Great one!! Crap this was so good- the level of intellect woven into the core of the piece. The detail and eye to attention you injected into this amplified the authenticity and the wow factor...you killed this for me.


Great stuff bro!!

~M.Babu~

[Tate Morgan]

This is profoundly put .I see a touch of greatness in you

[Anna]

This whole poem was very nice, the imagery was beautiful, (yadayadayadayda...)

But my favorite part were the last four lines of the poem... What an idea... I mean, what WOULD you do? Very powerful