DREAMY EUPHORIA

A Poem

      A sullen air of solemnity

       felt palpably forced,

                 undercurrents of

                  stress, earnestly

         soared, pin slanted

        hailstones purposefully

poured, as they thawed,

there followed a dreamy

euphoria, delectably caused,

by rose petals of browning

magenta, effusing an

abiding, sweet exuberance,

in  vivid, soothing,

gracious,  abundance. 

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I love you words and imagery in this. It reminds me of a wedding where one must marry, but everything eventually forced soft and smooth ... mixed with the weather, in this as a certain mood, which one can feel, I could be way off, but that's what I felt :) you write so beautifully my friend, thanks for sharing this pearl, of calmness.

- Elisa

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Oh such beautiful words, I can see a opening of a new poem by you, dear poetess, muchly thankyous :)

You're so ever welcome love, thanks for penning such art... xx

[Sami Khalil]

This was indeed vivid, soothing , gracious and abundantly great...:).................

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks kindly for your review Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[Pryde Foltz]

by rose petals of browning
magenta, effusing an
abiding, sweet exuberance,
in vivid, soothing,
gracious, abundance.

You give aging grace and beauty.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks kindly for your review Pryde.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You took me on a lovely journey... I felt as if there was a release of great stress...in the end, there was bliss found in a tranquil state of mind..

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks so much Robbie.

[Dr. Wood ?]

wonderful use of words......................

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Dr. Wood, thanks very much for this review.