DREAMY EUPHORIA

A Poem

      A sullen air of solemnity

       felt palpably forced,

                 undercurrents of

                  stress, earnestly

         soared, pin slanted

        hailstones purposefully

poured, as they thawed,

there followed a dreamy

euphoria, delectably caused,

by rose petals of browning

magenta, effusing an

abiding, sweet exuberance,

in  vivid, soothing,

gracious,  abundance. 

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I love you words and imagery in this. It reminds me of a wedding where one must marry, but everything eventually forced soft and smooth ... mixed with the weather, in this as a certain mood, which one can feel, I could be way off, but that's what I felt :) you write so beautifully my friend, thanks for sharing this pearl, of calmness.

- Elisa

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Oh such beautiful words, I can see a opening of a new poem by you, dear poetess, muchly thankyous :)

You're so ever welcome love, thanks for penning such art... xx

[David Aiello]

That was beautiful twice with delicious rhythm, I think I'm going to read it again!
*interlude*

I'm tasting the image with that strangely silent post-hail orangey-purple light; I need to thank you, I hadn't remembered that otherwise. You've made a window, here.
Thank You!

^___________^!

[Norma M Sutton]

Love the color usage in this. The colors and the rhythm are great.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hello, thanks so much!

[emmajoy]

The way in which you've placed your words and made them meld is like the gentle tapping on a drum, a musical mantra, words to dream with, time to close eyes and see 'sweet exuberance' in a place only 'you' can reach. Lovely.. i leave, smiling.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I am very flattered by you comments, thank you dear Emma Joy, sincerely.

[Jack...]

Very smooth, soft, silk-like and beautiful are your words this day. As if a dream has appeared in broad daylight before my eyes. Gracefully the days pass and beauty becomes all the more evident. Lovely my friend.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Jack, you are very kind, thank you very much!

[Bobbie Coelho]

You write poems as that flown off the tongue and this is no exception, it is beautiful. I think it is so descriptive,no can almost smell the blossom

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Gosh that's s compliment, I thank you so much, Bobbie!

[Tai Ryens]

a poem about growing into a kind of ethereal ecstasy and inner peace.. calming and well done.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so much Tai.

[Pax]

A sullen air of solemnity

~ what a relaxing words you have here... the peaceful abundance of your mind pinned here is really beautiful my friend.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so much Pax.

[Dean]

really enjoyed the hailstone analogy

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks so much Dean.

[Dhaye]

So calming...just like the rose petals' essence.
We all wanted a perfect bliss...even in a dream.
Great!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so kindly Dear Dhaye.

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.